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Review Detail of Kingster1001 in Against Heaven's Will

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Kingster1001
Kingster1001Lv133yrKingster1001

Continuation of a previous series called Spirit cultivation. So far it seems that the author actually got an English speaker to read his work this time before posting. Fewer grammatical issues. Though I out right despise novels where the MC is given **** for no reason (like this novel is currently doing) I will keep going because I am too far to quit now.

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Against Heaven's Will

Piokilek

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Piokilek
PiokilekAuthorPiokilek

I'm back to daily uploads on AHW! Catch up on the latest chapters!

Piokilek
PiokilekAuthorPiokilek

Its just author improving in writing, hehe :) What do you mean by Mc getting shi.t? I didnt notice anything wrong :/

Kingster1001
Kingster1001Lv13Kingster1001

Maybe sounded a bit too harsh in the review cause I was vague. I personally don’t enjoy how, after entering the Heaven realm, Xuefeng just seems to keep getting more weight put on him so to speak. He was already going to the Heaven realm as a weakling, and all these new issues just seem like kicking a man while he’s down for no reason. For 40 chapters, its just been trials and tribulations for Xuefeng. I wanna see some good in his life quickly. Have a reunion with some of his women without drama happening. Have him find a stash of qi enhancements to boost his 9 elements quickly. I just never enjoy seeing a character fight from behind. Especially because fighting from behind in cultivation novels never feels impactful. The MC is gonna win anyways due to plot armor. So why make him a weakling? Just my personal take.

Piokilek:Its just author improving in writing, hehe :) What do you mean by Mc getting shi.t? I didnt notice anything wrong :/
Piokilek
PiokilekAuthorPiokilek

Well, thise tribulations were bound to happen as its heaven realm

Kernel
KernelLv2Kernel

Is the MC's personality developed during the previous novel? At the beginning of Spirit Cultivation, I found MC a bit beta and naive.

Green_Soul
Green_SoulLv3Green_Soul

yea same