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Review Detail of Katrina_Bea123 in The Traps of Black Swan

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Not gonna lie, I would not, and I would never, say that this is a perfect book. what I will say is that this book has more details and is more interesting than more than half of the books in this platform. The grammar isn’t flawless, and it sucks to some people like me who are grammar nazis. There are a few lines and sentences where it can be rephrased to sound better and smoother but it can be overlooked because the plot is absolutely interesting and I understand what is being said anyway. The grammar isn’t too bad and my curiosity and interest in the plot overcame/overwhelmed my inner grammar nazi. The plot is absolutely interesting. Although it has the elements of a cliche book, how this was written makes it so unique. There are novels where authors claim that the female leads are independent, when truly, they rely on the male lead a lot. The only time the female lead in this novel relied on the male lead was for trivial things and the times when he was just there for her mental and physical health. Now, I’m not saying that the plot is perfect because there are times where I find the transition to be not smooth, but I think that was only once or twice. There are novels in this platform which are nearly identical and barely have any uniqueness to it and because the author wrote it quite well, I can say that THIS NOVEL IS DEFINITELY NOT ONE OF THEM. At first I hesistated to read this, but I’m pretty glad I did.

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The Traps of Black Swan

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A grammar nazi rating 4+ to my novel is amusing. Thank you for a blunt review[img=recommend]