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FlagHoistingGuy
FlagHoistingGuyLv43yrFlagHoistingGuy

Haaa. Finished reading to the latest chapter and I'm stuck on a cliff again. Amazing. This is only the second time I've binged an original like this. This is a hidden gem and I'm surprised and pissed at how underpopular it is. What are you waiting for? Go start reading. In case you weren't convinced here's the review: Writing- 5/5 Reads like a published novel. Nothing to say here. It is a bit fast paced at parts and less detailed than your usual case-solving style novel. Written very well nonetheless. Very easy to imagine and everything is described well even with fewer details. Plot- 5/5 Amazing so far. I usually end up predicting a lot of the plot and planting my flags, but here I had a clue in the middle of a few arcs maybe at most. Unpredictable plots but not annoyingly convoluted. Characters- 6/5 THIS IS WHAT DID IT FOR ME. Among the best characterisation I've seen on this site. Not just the main characters, but all of them. The three things I loved the most in this novel were 1. Levi 2. Sam 3. The interactions between Levi and Sam Levi's monologues, dialogues, behaviour are all very fun to read. The romance(?) is really well done. Exactly the kind of romance I like. If I had to give a comparision, it's somewhat similar to Hachiman and Yukino in Oregairu or Jo Minjoon and Kaya Lotus in God of Cooking. If you are sick of those CEO romance novels then give this unique take a read. Overall, must read. I've read 100s of originals on this sight and this is in my top 2 favourites. Suggestions for the author: There's nothing much I can say here. 1. In the starting few chapters there are some spelling/ grammar errors.(Very few of them hardly noticeable) Some places have comma instead of period. One place had slick blood instead of slick blonde. Couple places have wrong tense, wrong gender. I think you can fix it if you read it once :) 2. For time skips within a chapter, you can leave a gap of few more lines or draw a line with stars ******************************************************** like this. It helps keep the imagination steady. Like seriously...there's no major flaws in the novels and I can only pick on things like this :p Please keep up the good work.

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100 Ways to Solve a Murder

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Vanlauredel
VanlauredelAuthorVanlauredel

Oh my gosh! Thank you so much for taking your time to write this review! I will do my best to recheck my past chapters for the errors, and will take your advise on this ***********************. All and all, I appreciate that you took the time to read my story and leave such a well thought of Review! I hope you stay and enjoy the ride! It's going to be bumpy. I <3 you, 3000.

FlagHoistingGuy
FlagHoistingGuyLv4FlagHoistingGuy

Also, if you don't mind, could you make an Index of Irish slang/cuss words and their English meanings?

Vanlauredel:Oh my gosh! Thank you so much for taking your time to write this review! I will do my best to recheck my past chapters for the errors, and will take your advise on this ***********************. All and all, I appreciate that you took the time to read my story and leave such a well thought of Review! I hope you stay and enjoy the ride! It's going to be bumpy. I <3 you, 3000.
Vanlauredel
VanlauredelAuthorVanlauredel

sure thing!

FlagHoistingGuy:Also, if you don't mind, could you make an Index of Irish slang/cuss words and their English meanings?
FlagHoistingGuy
FlagHoistingGuyLv4FlagHoistingGuy

Thank you!

Vanlauredel:sure thing!
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Madae_ArenaLv10Madae_Arena

well said

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Madae_ArenaLv10Madae_Arena

agree

cutymegha
cutymeghaLv4cutymegha

is this a bl story???

Treestar87
Treestar87Lv11Treestar87

Pretty spot-on review, I must say.