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First things first. I didn't read much, but I have one damn question. Why was Zila on that man's lap and, did they do it? Author, you must answer me. I have fallen into an existential crisis while trying to think of an answer. Second. The story is fairly enjoyable, but the progression is a bit tough. There are a few grammatical errors and false choice of words (For example, in the first chapter, Zila's Sister-in-law told her to get down for 'dinner', while it was still daytime and where the correct word should have been, breakfast) sprinkled here and there. Though, the errors weren't that much, so I didn't hinder my reading process. Also, as I said before, I think the first few chapters can be broken down into 3-4 separate chapters, while giving more insight to the characters and their backgrounds. Also, most of the time, the major situations from the past were simply stated like a fact (Like how Zila was set up, and how they broke up). I think if you describe the situations instead, from the character's perspective (Like you did while writing the scenarios occurring in the present), it'd help the readers to feel more intimate towards the characters and their situations. Finally, I'd recommend this book to anyone who wants something different from the random bossy male characters and somewhat weak-willed female leads. I'll keep reading, as it's quite refreshing!

His Accountant Princess

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First : they didn't . Second : All the chapters will be edited in two or three days so if you would like to read it then go on. Thank you for the review .