Review Detail of Swalload in Rising Against Fate
Review detail
The beginning of the story is very good, but when it comes to the part of the tournament, there is a lot of description of fights of secondary characters that nobody cares enough to enjoy the fights. We stayed, waiting for the MC fight that takes time to happen, unfortunately that leaves us frustrated and the development of the story does not go very well.
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I can understand that being the case, and with the slow updates, the whole experience becomes even worse. I plan to edit the earlier volume bit by bit as I move to the second one and remove the unnecessary bit, so I didn't want to miss out on parts that might be necessary. These characters are pillars of the future plot, so I didn't want to miss a lot. At this point, there are just 3 matches left in the tournament, so it's going to be over soon. The plot will progress smoothly from that point further. Thanks for reading, and thanks for the review :)