For one this is without a doubt a fanfiction piece, therefore should be moved. Otherwise this is one if not the best mha fanfic I've seen. I adore crossover fanfics that use the characters power and personality but aren't the actual person those tend to have unessassary baggage but these start of with a clean slate. The character is smart and strong but not overly op. Good op is when the character works for their power without achieving it all in an instant. The characters interact well and as for the harem aspect its actually very well done without grabbing every girl he sees and actually building relationships. Very well done, please move to fanfic section so this may receive the proper attention it deserves like your naruto torino piece.
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