I think you should put a “Slice of life” tag, honestly your story is kind of difficult to read, when it comes to trivial things you are extremely descriptive, like what your pets are like, your exact physical training routine, including the that he eats exactly and his relationship with mine leaving him even more concerned with trivial things, but with respect to the powers themselves you only use them at the moment or from a weak explanation or a full of information where you certainly cannot retain everything from once. Anyway ... I still don't believe in anyone's chat using haki, good luck with your story.
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