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A good entrance effort to writing an interesting novel for your first book. There are solid talents that I can see in the dialogues too. Fast-paced scenes can be toned down a few notches and terms introduction could be inserted once in a while though rather than as often. Overall, this novel could be a hidden gem through time once Author keeps on writing! Good work and good luck! ;)

Drift: The Destiny of a Celestial Designer

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Thank you Ramzey. I will keep your suggestions in mind and reflect on them.