Just another review to support my work in an extremely biased manner, this story is bit light-hearted, and dark at the same time, it hides the darkness underneath it kind fo like Ying and Yang. I plan to have a lot of fun with this one, I want to experience new things and explore the family setting, being transported to another world for a while huhu... do please enjoy.
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LIKEShadowsFinger:Hmm, the cute moments might have that effect, but it depends on your taste, try it :)
ShadowsFinger:Hmm, the cute moments might have that effect, but it depends on your taste, try it :)
I hope you’re not intending to have the wife end up others besides her husband, like with a harem of her own or something. The husband shouldn’t have one either. If you really want to put one in there then maybe let his kids end up with one when they’re older. I know it’s your novel and you can write whatever you want but I was really interested in finding a novel where the main couple is already married with kids and sent to a new word as a family. Where we could get some cute married couple romance while still enjoying the rest of the story. If all of the sudden the wife or husband starts cheating/messing around or marrying with other people that would ruin it for me. Can you please let me know if that’s what you intend for the wife to have a harem or other lovers so I can not start reading avoid getting disappointed, please? I’d really appreciate it. Best of luck with your novel.
ShadowsFinger:Not for... Marius :)
Hmm, you might have miss read my comment, I said not for Marius, meaning no harem for Marius, there won't be any for his wife either :) however, I can't say the same for others...
J_S_2998:I hope you’re not intending to have the wife end up others besides her husband, like with a harem of her own or something. The husband shouldn’t have one either. If you really want to put one in there then maybe let his kids end up with one when they’re older. I know it’s your novel and you can write whatever you want but I was really interested in finding a novel where the main couple is already married with kids and sent to a new word as a family. Where we could get some cute married couple romance while still enjoying the rest of the story. If all of the sudden the wife or husband starts cheating/messing around or marrying with other people that would ruin it for me. Can you please let me know if that’s what you intend for the wife to have a harem or other lovers so I can not start reading avoid getting disappointed, please? I’d really appreciate it. Best of luck with your novel.
The story was about Marius and his wife and kids. When the other person had asked if it was a harem and you said “Not for Marius” the only other character we knew about that was an ***** was his wife who is “mysterious” so I was afraid you meant his wife would end up with a harem, lol. Good to know that’s not the case. Thanks for clearing that up for me.
ShadowsFinger:Hmm, you might have miss read my comment, I said not for Marius, meaning no harem for Marius, there won't be any for his wife either :) however, I can't say the same for others...
Haha, my bad, but with this lovely couple, I could never do that to them, speaking of which I will try to get another chapter out for everyone tomorrow, been busy today.
J_S_2998:The story was about Marius and his wife and kids. When the other person had asked if it was a harem and you said “Not for Marius” the only other character we knew about that was an ***** was his wife who is “mysterious” so I was afraid you meant his wife would end up with a harem, lol. Good to know that’s not the case. Thanks for clearing that up for me.
That’s good to know. I’m glad. Finding a married ***** couple in a story is rare, finding one where nothing bad happens to their relationship is even rarer. So I’m even more excited to find out what happens next. Hope all is well and thanks for the hard work and these chapters.
ShadowsFinger:Haha, my bad, but with this lovely couple, I could never do that to them, speaking of which I will try to get another chapter out for everyone tomorrow, been busy today.
B3RS3RK3R:has this book an finish or was it canceled? idea seems good but if its not done i dont need to read it
Links? I loved this book. It was heart breaking when the completed tag hit it with out anymore chapters.
ShadowsFinger:dropped, being rewritten for my patreon then amazon