I agree with what some of the other readers have said. Starting out, there is a little problem with the development of the harem members. Some of that gets resolved in later chapters. One thing it didn't like was that just like someone else said, it seems like the author wants to make it so one person from every world is "in love" with the mc. I'm all for the harem thing, but even so, that would be in my opinion too much.
Dyrem
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LIKEI'm actively reading your story and wanted the exp for reviewing a book. I've spent quite a few power stones because it's very good.(currently at chapter 252)
Dyrem:I know, I heard a lot of complaints about the harem. But that's how I planned it. I don't know how far you are now into the story so I will not tell any possible spoilers, but everything or everyone he met has their own purpose which will slowly be revealed as the story progressed