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okay this is another review so there will be spoilers but I'm on 2034 that's the chapter I'm on right now I've noticed in a couple of these chapters so far especially this one they already got the tears several chapters before and yet it's brought up acting like they didn't do it I don't know if the author isn't paying attention or is simply forgetting what he's writing but this is a serious problem because then it makes the events of the chapters you have where you already have the four tears cuz you already got them for the Golden feather thing in a few chapters beforehand so the author must have forgotten this and then I've noticed every time a new energy or conversion or whatever is added to the system at the end of the chapter one of the characters goes oh to not cause any confusion we're going to call this blah blah blah energy like you don't need to break the fourth wall to tell us that just simply change the name of it and carry on so overall this is okay but it's extremely annoying because the author is literally forgetting what he's putting in his own book

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