Review Detail of olamarcel_1499 in Death... and me

Alot of clichés to be frank. Story development is okay but character design needs to be better. Author should explore character motivations more in depth especially the side characters. Side characters tend to fall under cliche characterization. World building could be better. In short, the author needs to research more on topics, ideology and settings they introduce to flesh out the story more. ...Also author should find other ways of reinforcing a character's quirk for example, "Roan is not interested in having romantic relationships" does not have to be reiterated every 5 chapters. Saying it once is enough, his actions should tell the rest.