There's been an improvement in writing quality after chapter 20....but...the plot is lackluster. It's like MC is in utopia. As long as its him, everything is possible. Please thicken the plot. This may be a fantasy genre, but it should still maintain a realistic aspect. Not all problems have easy solutions. So, looking for all possible excuses to make the MC triumph over all situations is a bit too much. It dulls anticipation.
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