Review Detail of Uncle_Sheogorath in Chaotic Dreams
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It's decent however there are some things I didn't like. Firstly mc is quite weird with his logic. E.g he forcefully turns some female into his slave subordinate by some sort of physical method or whatever however apparently se3 is out of line(apparently his righteous now) even if he desires it(Even says will do it later). LIKE lol with this logic- consent afterwards still wouldn't be consent Moreover, the talking system is also quite annoying and always a minus in fanfics.
Chaotic Dreams
Ouroboros_Infeos
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It's not that I don't like evil mc. However, when he (dominated?)forcefully recruited that girl with somewhat (sexual?) acts and then midway said that he will not fuk here for whatever moral reason, I found it quite stupid and illogical. And if you don't want rape or anything similar in your fanfic don't put these weird sort of situations where it would logically occur e.g he sexually harasses(forcefully enslaves her) but then somehow becomes good boy midway with meagre justifications not to fuk here. I'll keep reading, hope it gets better. Good luck!
Ouroboros_Infeos:is that so? I mean I did say the MC is 'evil' in a sense that he will do anything he like be it good or bad... anyway thx for review. help in getting better!
I see...you need to know that the MC is somehow a psychopath. so things like that are the 'norm' for him. he do not like rape as for him, sex is an act that get both partners to feel good and reciprocate to each other but enslaving (traning) is another thing. he will gladly do it for fun and/or to achieve his goal. thx for staying ^^
Uncle_Sheogorath:It's not that I don't like evil mc. However, when he (dominated?)forcefully recruited that girl with somewhat (sexual?) acts and then midway said that he will not fuk here for whatever moral reason, I found it quite stupid and illogical. And if you don't want rape or anything similar in your fanfic don't put these weird sort of situations where it would logically occur e.g he sexually harasses(forcefully enslaves her) but then somehow becomes good boy midway with meagre justifications not to fuk here. I'll keep reading, hope it gets better. Good luck!