Past 50-60 chapters (~ch 70 to ~130) showed an issue: The author doesn't know how to make story arcs actually develop. Things happen, but nothing seems to have progressed. MC is in the same spot, except some inconsequential events happened (i.e. you could skip them, and the story would still be fine). Oh yeah, this author seems to have taken away the MC's ability to think for himself. Asking the guy in his ring about knowledge he doesn't know is one thing, having the MC ask the guy about decisions he should be making himself is another.
Grand_Void_Daoist
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LIKEI read till chapter 726 but he is too good to other people and has a hero complex.he meddles in things that don't need him.does he change or remains same?the author other book worm sovereign brought me here and I thought it would at least be like that instead we have a MC who is not like worm sovereign.does he change?
Manjot_Kang_7194:give it a try man i have read upto 1663 its a gem man