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Review Detail of Grand_Elder in Walker Of The Worlds

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Grand_Elder
Grand_ElderLv12yrGrand_Elder

All the world building and mysterious of the story loose its lustre because of MC. Mc is too blunt. He lacks uniqueness that makes a main character. It gets irritating when he cant even use his brain for anything. He is always like '"what do i do senior?". "should i speak senior ?" everything that he do, thinks all came from senior(sprit in the ring) I get it author said, story is slow-paced but this is too much . After reading 150 chapters i can say MC develop from naive idiot to brianless puppet

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YourNightmare1870
YourNightmare1870Lv2YourNightmare1870

Spot on. I lost interest when he still playing detective but couldn't decide on his own. 🤣 he needs opinions even on little things. (what color of underwear should I wear senior?)

Cenauge
CenaugeLv14Cenauge

His master does eventually take more of a backseat, but the MC doesn't gain much more of a personality (though it is some improvement.) The thing that becomes much more annoying is how everyone around his starts singing his praises both openly and in their thoughts, in ways that go well beyond the old "he's such a young such-and-such stage." Not only is he the most handsome, but also supremely talented, the most hard worker, a natural teacher, etc, etc. Anyone who isn't his enemy seems to become his fanclub, with characters thinking things like "anyone would die to have an ally like this" which (while obviously hyperbolic) is especially dumb in a cultivation setting, where the entire point for 99.99% of cultivators' existence is not dying.