All in all, this is the first time Declaring that this book is a HIDDEN GEM. The pacing is good, the grammar is good, the story is excellent, the quality of the environment is exquisite. I really like the attention to the details. This are compliments. For aspirations, I wish for you author to be well and healthy to update regularly. I wish for consistency in details. What I found disappointing with popular eastern fantasy cultivation world is that the quality lessens so much that if some read the later chapters they wont understand it. The best thing about books is how you explained and imagined the fighting scenes, the view, the environment, etc.. I wish you could improve upon this more. Never to be too complacent. And in the future this novel might reach mainstream.
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