Review Detail of Kotrem in Rebirth Of A Serial Killer *Remake*

Hello, Author here! I will obviously be giving myself 5 stars! Now a little background for those unaware. I originally wrote Rebirth of a Serial Killer 4 years ago and it somehow got a bit of traction. The story was a mess, with almost zero plot development, most if not all besides the MC were 2d. I think I had like one actual supporting character, a huge amount of plot holes, and a stupid amount of plot armor for Zuhn. This time around, I want to try and make long-lasting characters, an interesting story, and a better story overall. I say this is four years in the making, because each time I've tried to rewrite this story, I completely changed the story. This time, I will try to stay relatively close to the old story. Just I will expand on it, and make it easier to follow and understand. Also, this time, I will be adding a solid cultivation and magic structure compared to my previous one... I had to read my whole book to remember what was even going on, it has been so long. I'm going to be honest, I don't know how I thought anything I wrote was good. Lmao. Anyway, This is a remake of my original book, hope everyone enjoys it. P.S - I usually drop my remakes after 2 chapters, so being at 5 is already an improvement. I will try to release at least 2 chapters a week until I catch up to where I left off when I dropped my original.