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We have the same genre when it comes to magic and medieval tropes. But I must say this is fairly intriguing story. Updates are no problem whatsoever, as well as writing quality, although story development seems a little slow because from my perspective the first three chapters are important into gathering the attention of the reader. It kinda lacks the eye catching part, no offense. Character design is quite nice as your writing style directly shows how each individual move and react to one another creating a sense of emotion from them. Overall no problems, would definitely recommend so please keep writing! Hope This’ll be helpful.
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Thanks for the input (^^) This is the first story that I'm writing in first person on top of being my first isekai, so there's bound to be some hiccups as I try to grab my style. My pacing, I admit, needs work when I have no plans whatsoever. But I hope I'm at least improving as I write this thing. xD
Your welcome. Hey don’t worry about it. You and me both, I just started a couple of months ago and had a hard time adjusting to a lot of stuff. So more power to you! A little hint though is think that you’re the character.
MokouFriedChicken:Thanks for the input (^^) This is the first story that I'm writing in first person on top of being my first isekai, so there's bound to be some hiccups as I try to grab my style. My pacing, I admit, needs work when I have no plans whatsoever. But I hope I'm at least improving as I write this thing. xD