Review Detail of gmy in DEFUNCT1

Writing Quality & Stability of Updates. It is easy to read and interesting as well, though I sometimes sense I can foretell where the plot is going. But who knows, we might encounter a huge twist! Story Development, Character Design & World Background. I have read about 16 chapters and I like how the story is going. You made a great start, keep it up, author! I will be anticipating for more updates to come.