Review Detail of Leylin_Farlier99 in Pokemon the Journey

My rating may seem low but hear me out. In this fic Ash is a little more mature than his cannon counterpart and that is good. Now we come to the problem that is his growth is way too much unrealistic as well as his rivals gray and leaf. most adults are barely B+ or A rank trainers and that is after years of training but ash has a full team of A+ and two pseudo s rank pokemon along with arious B+ rank pokemon in 8 months. And every time something happens pokemon league calls ash . Qar with shadow pokemon ash destroy's 90 percent of them it is said by LT.surge . evey problem call ash. This is just unrealistic and unreasonable. they relay on 10 year old kid for every thing. It is better than most trash but nothing extraordinary either. Well but if you want to pass the time than this is good for that but not a fic you will follow.