I like your story a lot. Has really good mix of reality in the Pokémon world and the game. Some of the writing needs to be cleared up because it was pretty confusing. One example is the fact that red has 2 wives? Makes me wonder if ash will as well? Overall it’s pretty good but it just needs some clarification.
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