Well starting chapter are ok but that not greater but further story develol good I mean those who wnt ash to begin mature n evolve all his pokemon is in this fanfic but just a dragonite is left to complete is team
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Well a spoiler for you as Ash's team in Kanto is way to big so he will get an egg of certain of pokemon in orange island arc.