Everything is good but in the beginning the mc is a stupid retarded child like even if he’s sheltered you control the story he doesn’t have to be so childish
Hi.
Thanks for the review.
I tremendously appreciate it.
I know my Mc is naive, but with time he would change... When he engages in his first battle to the death.
Thanks for reading and for dropping a review. I totally appreciate it. Bless you.
Hope you stick around for more. ✌️ 👌