ok so if you can get past the grammer errors and it being in (3rd person? more like a D&D session where the Dungeon master tales you what you see and do) then this is a good book if not don't read
yea, I have no idea why when I start i did a second person view. from now I'm third person view.
And after I finished the Elf saga, I will do a lot major of story change from the early chapters as well.