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Review Detail of SkyNeves in Isekai Futanari Monster Girls

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Hello to all new and old readers, the name's Sky and I'll be doing my review/rating on the book. Before I start rating I'll review it. [Review] The book in general is good but then you start to notice stuff and to some it's completely fine but to others it's annoying. For me it's the fact that the protagonist, the person who is literally changing the country and destroys armies is a Beta, a spineless b*tch or a wuss if you prefer. Don't get me wrong I don't care about his sexual preferences since I have my own but he's a beta. MC is super strong from right after being isekai'd... Cool. MC likes futas...okay, I can deal with this. MC likes to be rammed...Wait what? Doesn't matter anyway 🤷🏻‍♀️. MC is the destroyer of armies...Wow nice. MC is never(if he is it's super rare) "active" or shows initiative even knowing that he's already banged people and they're into him. Later on the MC who was so careless that he beat a villain in his old world is slowly becoming a sissy... What kind of f*cked up plot progression is this? Overall: The plot is decent (there are plot holes and random stuff the author mentions but we don't get an introduction of it, making some confused but it was labeled as "it'll make sense if you click this link" why would I want to open a link about info on a book I'm reading?), but a lot of stuff are just annoying at some point. [Rating] 1-Writing Quality: The writing quality of the book is decent, not great but not awful. You can read it but it's not awesome. [3 Stars Here] 2-Story Development: The story has a decent flow but it's all over the place, take the first part for example, how could a human yandere or not make a person responsible for your reincarnation sweat? Oh and guess what truck-sama talks, guess you have to be fluent in honking to understand it. And there's the fact that the author literally put too much stuff labeling it as "side story" and we also have "Claire" who I guess the author wanted to make her be a connection to MC but it felt unnecessary, not saying it wasn't interesting but it was unnecessary. Like get that MC had a friend and they had a deep connection but wouldn't it be better to do that in the first chapters before mc is isekai'd? But what do I know, each writer with its own vision. [3 Stars even though I feel like there is more crap than good things] 3-Character Design: *sigh* I'll end up writing too much like on the previous rating so I'll just say that the characters aren't always consistent, mc is a beta wuss, and even the "invaders" are all over the place. [3 Stars because of Lenna's kid because she's the only consistent one from start to end] 4-Updating Stability: I don't know, I Haven't seen any updates so I can't comment on this. [5 Stars Here since idk] 5-World Background: The world has details but it's also not well organized in some points, the positive is that I can imagine locations due to details but others are just not that detailed, immersive or feel like a space I guess. [4 Stars because it's the only place I can say the author did a good job, it lost a star because of many points of view that destabilized locations for me] Overall Rating: 3.6 Honestly I just selected this because I wanted to see how futa book would be like, if they'd be like doujins, if they'd be like a wholesome but kinky stuff or if it'd be full on weird. it's honestly a bit of everything with wholesome being the lowest. And I'm only reading to see how this ends. To any new readers feel free to read at least 1/2 chapters before deciding if it's not worth it or if it is.

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Thank you reading my story and giving an honest review. 😁😁