Review Detail of Tchao707 in Traveling To The World Of Anime With The Dark Souls System

Ok so first thing first their is one review that say that this is a yaoi, that is incorrect as it was stated on the same chapter that naruto is a girl and her real name is asumi, now i can understand the confusions, but yes naruto was genderbent so now she is female making this non yaoi, I do recommend the author to put that in the description so the author can advoid these confusion and would help out his fic for those who are not interest to read about a gay characters. Now onto the real review, the only thing I dont like is how the mc told the hokage everything about the basic dark soul lore and believe him. Even with the deathmark sarutobi should have still have a mindreader check his memories, another thing i don't like is the sudden time skip that came out of no where unless you watch the anime or manga your gonna br confuse wtf just happen. Now for the good the story have a interresting premise with having an dark soul system in the naruto universe. And having mc being able to use chakra is pretty cool but can make the spells in dark soul useless unless he use divine spells, and the mc is interesting otherwise that all i have to say not much happens so I can only hope it gets better from here on out