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I wouldn't recommend reading this Novel. There's no real story. Girl get's kidnapped and takes it for granted. there's no fear and she's unsure if she should trust her kidnapper. the author seems to have no understanding of basic human behavior at all.
Within You (GL)
KewlBeanz
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Thank you for leaving a review! I know it’s really been a bit messy, and I’m really sorry that it didn’t suit your taste. I’ve been seriously considering discontinuing this story for those reasons, and the fact that it just didn’t click with me. I’m at least glad you tried to read some of it with my trash story telling skills. Thank you again!