Review Detail of neaht3 in (Hiatus) Your Alpha
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The story is enjoyable and light. I am into dark and psychological settings but even so, I enjoyed this novel so far. The author follows a steady pace which keeps the reader always refreshed after a chapter. The characters are easily likable and there is enough of development to be able to analyze their personalities. I would love to see more work done on the world background development as the story so far has been focused only on the main character. However, I do feel there is a great opportunity, with the latest chapters, to begin building up a world in the story. The grammar is good and delivers the story clear. Other than my selfish request to see more of the world building, I believe the story so far has kept a high quality. Good job! (:
(Hiatus) Your Alpha
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Been thinking of broading the settings, just a bit mixed up thoughts currently. Lol. Thanks for the advise, though. Thank you for appreciating my story. I'll try to write more per week but given the busy workdays, not so sure. I am aiming for a 100 chapters or more but I'm too way far to it. I would really want my mind to go for an overdrive and think faster than a cheetah to create more but somehow I can't. Hope my mind cooperates more so I can see other sides and personality of my own created characters. I am into writing random proses or poems using another writing platform 2 years ago (mostly kind of sad, depressing or a bit of that type, rarely sunshiny topics, most of those are more like winter). Thinking of sharing it here in WN as well but fails to do so XD
CatSnitch:Been thinking of broading the settings, just a bit mixed up thoughts currently. Lol. Thanks for the advise, though. Thank you for appreciating my story. I'll try to write more per week but given the busy workdays, not so sure. I am aiming for a 100 chapters or more but I'm too way far to it. I would really want my mind to go for an overdrive and think faster than a cheetah to create more but somehow I can't. Hope my mind cooperates more so I can see other sides and personality of my own created characters. I am into writing random proses or poems using another writing platform 2 years ago (mostly kind of sad, depressing or a bit of that type, rarely sunshiny topics, most of those are more like winter). Thinking of sharing it here in WN as well but fails to do so XD