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I'll do my review honestly as possible like what I do in most review swaps. Writing Quality is great. The plot is interesting even if it is the common werewolf plot. The paragraphs are attention-grabbing, it really hooks me to the point I did not realize I finished all eight chapters so far. I'm not good at grammar too, so I can't just randomly judge the grammar of yours. Character interaction is wonderful, especially the "small talk of love" chapter. Overall, I will be giving your novel five stars!
(Hiatus) Your Alpha
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A***, thank you so much for the feedback, I really appreciate this. I am not much into lengthy chapters though I am trying to have more of my story in it. I wanted to not rush the scenes but well, it's story still. The "Small talk of love" chapter, I was not really thinking much how I would deliver that but I have to remind myself that this is a romance novel. I am not into romance but well, I had to go by contest's rule. Again thank you for the feedback. đ