Review Detail of LuminouShadow in Strongest Shinobi (Currently Rewriting)

So where should I start. Well I appreciate the author for his fanfic and the effort but. I will just write short criticism on this writing for future developements, 1. The story is inconsistent. 2. Timelines are jumbled up which will tick of avid fans. 3. Many decisions made here doesnt make sense and the story development is childish. 1 star for that 4. Its full of fluff sigh it will do as a good short story or something but as a novel on Naruto its severely irritating when its ok for the MC to be how he is written for that i gave a 5 star for Cha design but how the author depicted every other people as if they are revolving around the mc is dissapointing. 5. I wanted to read the whole that has been updated but after a dozen or so chapter seeing the inconsistencies I dropped. Good luck to the author tho, hopefully his future writings will be much better for a avid naruto fan