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Review Detail of MonstruoDormido in That time I got reincarnated as an abyssal Phoenix

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First of all, the story's great. that is, if you don't care about reason for something. I on the other hand find it weird that someone would tell another person that they are reincarnated right from the first chapter. I mean its clear the author's desperate to make the girl and rimuru to be acquainted mostly because he is the original protagonist of the anime. I find it quite disappointing because I expected a little mystery of her origin and not straight up stripping all secrets. Even if I know that the story might be interesting I still find that annoying. Letting rimuru to name her is like giving herself in his care. A sort of submission, which I don't like. I may be interested to read it someday but that scene ruined my reading appetite. No offense, just stating my views about it. Ciao... [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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That time I got reincarnated as an abyssal Phoenix

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That is completely fair, I mean this whole thing was, and still is, a way for me to get better at writing and I'll be the first to admit that I wasn't the best back in the day, not that I'm the best now but you get my point. Anyway, you might actually enjoy my other novel/fanfiction which I only started recently, as such it's quality is far better compared to the older chapters of this one. It is called Alternative Stories and it's over on ScribbleHub at the moment, although I am starting to consider uploading it on here as well despite my growing disdain for this website.

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