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BalancedSelfInsert
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As the author, and someone who prides themselves on honesty in my reviews I'll personally talk about this story, and my writing. As a writer, when I'm in the mood I can do some really good work, however I admitedly am incosistent, and I believe that I can have some really bad lows. I want to say I can gurantee 7+ chapters a week, but I really can't (barring they are all 1k+), however I can gurantee at least one chapter a week, hopefully no matter what. For this story specifically, the story is going to feel weak at points, and I can attribute that to a few things, but I'll admit with how weak I believe the Kiri arc to be, it doesn't look that good, eh? I know the characters of Naruto inside out, if I can't do them in a decent enough way, I should stop writing. For Asura specifically, his character is... Interesting. Asura isn't just a millenia old, he has lived over a dozen lives. He has lost over a dozen families, and does over a dozen lives. Hes a hospoch of all sorts of different emotions and personalities, that all make up Asura. This is an AU that I'm actually decently proud of, there's rich history not only in the past, but also the future. Overall, in my mind this should be rated an Average to Above Average story, where if I get a burst of inspiration some arcs could be straight up amazing. Then again... Average on webnovel is someone who doesn't speak English trying to write a story without a beta reader or grammar checking... So overall? Ill rate this story 6/5.

The Wandering Sage

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Ken_Reader
Ken_ReaderLv4Ken_Reader

Make3-4 chapters a week that will be good

BalancedSelfInsert
BalancedSelfInsertAuthorBalancedSelfInsert

I can definently hit that, and I'll strive for more!

Ken_Reader:Make3-4 chapters a week that will be good
King_P
King_PLv14King_P

please update soon author san

MutedSith
MutedSithLv3MutedSith

It’s been five months idiot.

King_P:please update soon author san