The story is great, but I felt like something was unsettling about the descriptions. Make it look more formal because the readers will look more uncomfortable reading it. For the story, it's really good. Actually added it to my recommendations list. HIGHLY RECOMMENDED TO EVERYONE WHO likes MAGICAL REALISMđ Kudos, author. Maybe a little proofreading will be alright.
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