Review Detail of hersheytemple in A technomancer’s journey in an apocalyptic world

I love this post apocalyptic meets magic fantasy mesh that's going on, an enjoyable read with a fair amount of action but can get semi repetitive/ predictable some names like the mc's sisters name michalina... like bro y u trying to b fancy, I don't even know how to pronounce that, just shortened it to Micha to make it easier for myself. lately I've been in love with kingdom building and this mastering with fantasy is perfect, mc does some strange random things sometimes like he'll get really mad and start pouting like a baby for no real reason, but that's also usual for mc's on this platform from what I've seen. The bad, just skip the first chapter, the most useless garbage I've read in my life. it just felt like one gigantic run on sentence. usually first chapters set the mood for the whole book or sets the setting for the readers but it was all about how mc was this super genius and that he had the worst possible family ever... if author was gonna do something like this at least have it a little more relatable to the story and have it more believable the only purpose of that chapter was so that the author could give the mc a different family to start with, The other disgusting thing of this series is the amount of typos and grammatical errors holy balls it's bad, web novel needs to start doing something about this, cuz some s errors on here aren't even readable, this one I say is just readable with a little bit of effort on the readers end. I just wish all the author would give each chapter a look through a second or third time, they'd find most of the errors just doing that and it should drastically improve the readability but a lot. please omg 🥺🥺🥺 overall I've now just accepted certain commonalities from all author on this platform but the story is still a definite recommend read, quite enjoyable.