Review Detail of YungBrosketi in I got summoned to another world, then married a yandere!
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Please author go back and touch up upon your earlier chapters. The concept is so cool and I've been wanting to read a story like this for awhile but cant find any decent ones. I tried to read the first few chapters and the story is so enticing but the grammar mistakes drive me insane.
I got summoned to another world, then married a yandere!
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Also let me just say that sometimes it's not just grammer "mistakes". There are times when I notice you could have phrased something better or used a more eloquent word to engage the reader more. I feel like this novel would be even more popular than it already is if you went back and reviewed your early writings!