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Sixth
SixthAuthor3yrSixth

Hello, I am the author of this novel! What I want to write is a cute yandere wife who is all over her husband! She wants to be with only him! This is surely no good, but this is where the husband steps in! He will change his yandere wife, teach her common sense so that their relationship is the best! Kyoya has to grow in a strength to achieve all of this! If you have any questions, feel free to ask me here!

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I got summoned to another world, then married a yandere!

Sixth

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DragoPackMan
DragoPackManLv4DragoPackMan

What about the system supporting heroine ( something like quest with if u displease her u will die)?

Sixth
SixthAuthorSixth

It begins with the yandere wife, then escalates to the harem I guess! But I don't think everyone will be yandere.

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rafa101
rafa101Lv12rafa101

Will you get an editor somewhere in the future? Sometimes your english get really rough

Meds
MedsLv3Meds

You know it will be great if they both only have each other and not a harem, a subtle harem is atleast acceptable but in the end will stay to be with her. that will be a nice touch to the classic thrope. all the best.

Sixth
SixthAuthorSixth

It might be hard

rafa101:Will you get an editor somewhere in the future? Sometimes your english get really rough
Sixth
SixthAuthorSixth

Noted, thanks for the comment :D

Meds:You know it will be great if they both only have each other and not a harem, a subtle harem is atleast acceptable but in the end will stay to be with her. that will be a nice touch to the classic thrope. all the best.
Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5Deadrule_vivek

In the end its your novel so do whatever you want but if its a decent harem i don't have any objections as semi harem like nisekoi are good and all but i don't think they can be called "Harem" genre in true sense of word ...harem if its a real one should end with polygamy¯\_( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)_/¯

Sixth:Noted, thanks for the comment :D
Nikhil_Chand
Nikhil_ChandLv4Nikhil_Chand

See your concept is good but if you go for harem(which i prefer) then make it a sensible one. Meaning not any random girl for any random reason should fall for MC. She should have a personality and she should be capable enough, doesn't necessarily means strength. It could be business, administration, training military or people any field but she should have life and ambitions of her own too. And harem members should not be forgotten and become obselete. Why people hate harem? Coz author introduces girl, girl is powerful than MC, girl mindlessly falls for MC, girl helps MC then MC becomes stronger, MC moves to other area and girl is forgotten,left behind and then after hundreds chapter is re introduced for a chapter or two then forgotten again. If you do this then kindly dont make harem. Girls in harem should be independent, have depth in character, stay with MC most of the time, travel with him or even if they have to stay behind it is temporary or for short duration, substantial reason for them to love MC. Kindly keep these points in consideration and keep it 3-4, max 5. Also we have a yandere. MC should have a solid explanation for yandere to accept a new harem member and not just sloppy. If you do all these I dont see why people wont like harem

Sixth
SixthAuthorSixth

Thank your for those words, I will try my best.

Nikhil_Chand:See your concept is good but if you go for harem(which i prefer) then make it a sensible one. Meaning not any random girl for any random reason should fall for MC. She should have a personality and she should be capable enough, doesn't necessarily means strength. It could be business, administration, training military or people any field but she should have life and ambitions of her own too. And harem members should not be forgotten and become obselete. Why people hate harem? Coz author introduces girl, girl is powerful than MC, girl mindlessly falls for MC, girl helps MC then MC becomes stronger, MC moves to other area and girl is forgotten,left behind and then after hundreds chapter is re introduced for a chapter or two then forgotten again. If you do this then kindly dont make harem. Girls in harem should be independent, have depth in character, stay with MC most of the time, travel with him or even if they have to stay behind it is temporary or for short duration, substantial reason for them to love MC. Kindly keep these points in consideration and keep it 3-4, max 5. Also we have a yandere. MC should have a solid explanation for yandere to accept a new harem member and not just sloppy. If you do all these I dont see why people wont like harem
J_S_2998
J_S_2998Lv13J_S_2998

I love the sweet yandere idea. Yandere wedding ftw. Harems can be great but only if done well. Harems are frustrating to me UNLESS he marries all the harem members, because if there's a harem and he only picks one girl then all the people who got attached to the girls who dont get picked are let down and the other girls get left out. If you're going to put all that effort into the harem members then let them all win so no one is left out or loses. Besides more wives isn't a bad thing lol. Or just do a cute one girl/one wife romance with a happy ending that works too. That way whether it's a harem or not, everyone wins and everyone is happy. Best of luck with your book.

Sixth
SixthAuthorSixth

Thanks! I will try my best with the harem!

J_S_2998:I love the sweet yandere idea. Yandere wedding ftw. Harems can be great but only if done well. Harems are frustrating to me UNLESS he marries all the harem members, because if there's a harem and he only picks one girl then all the people who got attached to the girls who dont get picked are let down and the other girls get left out. If you're going to put all that effort into the harem members then let them all win so no one is left out or loses. Besides more wives isn't a bad thing lol. Or just do a cute one girl/one wife romance with a happy ending that works too. That way whether it's a harem or not, everyone wins and everyone is happy. Best of luck with your book.
MonoNautilus
MonoNautilusLv4MonoNautilus

Tell, is the system a asshole? Is the mc the owner of the system or the system the owner of the mc?

Sixth
SixthAuthorSixth

It's not asshole!

MonoNautilus:Tell, is the system a asshole? Is the mc the owner of the system or the system the owner of the mc?
Leirs
LeirsLv10Leirs

Absolutely no ntr author? I need your words for confirmation.

Sixth:It's not asshole!
Sixth
SixthAuthorSixth

No ntr

Leirs:Absolutely no ntr author? I need your words for confirmation.
GodxOwn
GodxOwnLv12GodxOwn

Um mc will have more woman right?

Sixth
SixthAuthorSixth

Harem tag means yes

GodxOwn:Um mc will have more woman right?
Max255
Max255Lv6Max255

Can we expect mature scenes?

Sixth
SixthAuthorSixth

Yes

Max255:Can we expect mature scenes?
CryptoCat
CryptoCatLv4CryptoCat

So he’s married to a yandere but also has a harem? Because if so then this really makes me wonder whether the aforementioned wife is actually a yandere and not just a really possessive lover. I feel like if the wife was actually a yandere then she would just straight up murder the other women and isolate the MC so that she could enjoy him for herself.