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SecondSea
SecondSeaLv143yrSecondSea

A book with lots of LOL !!! A very funny story about a 5 year old cussing princess and her dead beat dad. The writing quality in the first chapters feels like a new author who wasn't flesh out the story enough. It was hard to read because it felt like only the actions described with emotional aspects, but don't give up on this story because it get a lot better in the later chapters. I especilly like the writing interctions between her sh+tty dad and the princess because she directly tells her looser father what she thinks of him which is hilarious. I also love the fact that the characters in this book feel real and reasonable. I hate books where 90 percent of the characters are murdering psychopaths or low IQ prostitutes who do anything for money.

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Royal Secret: I'm a Princess!

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sola_cola
sola_colaAuthorsola_cola

Thank you for the review! Hahaha I admit that I wasn't really into the story yet at the first part. I don't like it when female characters suck up to male characters. LOL. That's why after Neoma snapped at the emperor, I finally felt comfortable writing the story. I'm ashamed that my personal feelings affected the way I wrote the first part, but I learned from it. Thank you for giving my story a chance. <3

Claudia_Guerrier
Claudia_GuerrierLv15Claudia_Guerrier

thanks author for the great story and thank you can you please give a crazy update[img=recommend]

Leona_Desrosiers
Leona_DesrosiersLv4Leona_Desrosiers

Good job

lily_crescent
lily_crescentLv4lily_crescent

how many chapters will there be??

Tiny_Miny_8660
Tiny_Miny_8660Lv1Tiny_Miny_8660

Yah you are right

Tiny_Miny_8660
Tiny_Miny_8660Lv1Tiny_Miny_8660

Yah

sola_cola:Thank you for the review! Hahaha I admit that I wasn't really into the story yet at the first part. I don't like it when female characters suck up to male characters. LOL. That's why after Neoma snapped at the emperor, I finally felt comfortable writing the story. I'm ashamed that my personal feelings affected the way I wrote the first part, but I learned from it. Thank you for giving my story a chance. <3
Hansa1329
Hansa1329Lv14Hansa1329

Your writing style has improved and I’m totally in love with it. Please make sure to complete the story. I was very sad when there was no updates on Mommy Villainess. So I really hope you finish this (and then MV too😉) yes, I’m greedy for your stories.

sola_cola:Thank you for the review! Hahaha I admit that I wasn't really into the story yet at the first part. I don't like it when female characters suck up to male characters. LOL. That's why after Neoma snapped at the emperor, I finally felt comfortable writing the story. I'm ashamed that my personal feelings affected the way I wrote the first part, but I learned from it. Thank you for giving my story a chance. <3