Review Detail of AbyssVentus in Primordial Bloodline

I would have written a better review if this was stuck in the fan fiction section instead since it really is just a rip off of the City of Sin Novel. You have made a slight adjustment to the character but the plot itself follows the the original novel itself. E.g. He goes to the mage academy called the All Blue and learns from the Owner herself and she gives out delights, or the fact that he becomes a rune master and is a genius. I sounds like Richards journey in the City of Sin with a slight personality difference and beginning. Also mate his dad servants horse is called larva and is a rune knight. Richards dads servant was a rune knight with a horse called Larva. The only good point of your novel is the frequency of chapters which could change in the future. My advice to you start changing the novel to follow an original plot or just stick in fanfiction.