The grammar and language used in the story doesn’t compel one to continue reading. It feels kinda dragged out at parts and the resolution is not as satisfying as it was. Daughter, who is smart and witty, finds dad and somehow mum is just giving in whenever after they got together. The story feels inadequate and it’s a strain to complete (am at around the 1000 chpt now).
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