Review Detail of DNHELO in Apocalypse : Copy Master

I like the idea behind the story but the grammar is meh at best. The first volume is ... Sub-par but it gets better after the second volume. One thing I didn't like is the fact Mc goes around bringing people from one story to another like tauriel from LOTR, speaking of Tauriel did u now shes such a vane women that she fell in love with our Mc at first sight BECAUSE OF HIS LOOKS, no? Then be warned because there is romance .... And it's the [ cringe /I don't belive she would do that / does this author have a thing for her] type Overall I don't personally like the story but it's MUCH BETTER than many of those out there so give it a read