Review Detail of AnnaTerra in I was a Single Mother 'till I Met Him'

I like the idea of the story and I love the character... thought I feel Aurora is quite rude and didn't act her own age but still quite likeable. Anyway it's a nice story that feature a strong woman and the wacky people around her supporting her. The best friend is a gem. Despite all that I feel the delivery is a bit lacking. The story jump around too much and it's lacking of detail and explaination causing confusion to myself. What actually make matter worse is actually the grammatical error. I really recommend the author to get editor or proof reader to help fix this problem. There's some what I feel like a little misguided information that can be fix with a little more research other than that everything else is acceptable. Anyway it's a nice story please keep up the good work.