Review Detail of Louise_Afonso_1551 in My Dominating Apollo

There is no flow to this story. Characters are not clearly developed. There are major grammatical errors. There is way too much waffling. Is the author trying to bulk the book up by increasing the number of words? So much detail about e.g. walking to a lift etc which is boring and it adds nothing to the story. She lives with her mother and knocks on the door? Does Appolo speak? There is so much focus on the father? I feel like I completely wasted an hour of my life reading this.