Review Detail of DarthVegito in drop drop drop

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DarthVegitoLv104yrDarthVegito

Writing structure makes this so hard to read it’s straight irritating so don’t bother reading until the author says there was a rewrite. No quotes for dialogue or capital letters in any sentence.

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Sina0083

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Sina0083AuthorSina0083

I will change my novel so you can change your mind

4yr

Sina0083AuthorSina0083

You can change your comment beacuse I will change my novel

4yr

Sina0083AuthorSina0083

I changed my story

4yr

Potato_SamaLv4Potato_Sama

Dude the wrong grammar is a put off. If your not a native English speaker its okay. Use grammarly. Its free. It will show you your mistakes and show correction. Best of luck.

Sina0083:I changed my story

4yr

Sina0083AuthorSina0083

Thank you

Potato_Sama:Dude the wrong grammar is a put off. If your not a native English speaker its okay. Use grammarly. Its free. It will show you your mistakes and show correction. Best of luck.

4yr