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Lv132yr

truly a trash novel, it couldve been great if it was intended to be an evil mc with how twisted his personality is, but no. at this point mc is a lovestruck simp who acts evil sometimes then shows a hero wannabe side later. his personality it completely all over the place. grammar is meh. world building is good. if I were author I would rewrite the whole thing and either make a dragon mc with a personality fitting a dragon, or he could just rewrite and make MC a non dragon cuz at this point mc is acting so much like a simp and doormat that him being a dragon is more a joke than anything else....

ROYAL DRAGON AND PHOENIX TRANSMIGRATE TO EARTH

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MortalsImagination
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And fitting dragon personality???? You talk about all these specifics but you want a generic dragon to be the mc??? You’re lost

MortalsImagination
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Acting like a hero? Where I’v never seen mc act like a hero anywhere in this novel, all the kids he’s “saved” have been given a choice to stay on the streets or follow him whole heartedyly and when some of those kids decided to betray him he’s killed them without any hesitation, that’s the only thing I can think of when you try to call him some type of hero and a simp and doormat? While he definitely seems to care for his women a lot I’ve never seen them even try to run over him/ disrespect him so where are you getting that from? not the best argument