Review Detail of NotUse in Until death do us apart

Five stars! The first chapter hooked me up, especially during the snake scene. Now I wonder if milk works :) Anyways, back to the review! The plot is interesting and unique despite having three chapters so far. As for the story development, it seems to be at a nice pace since the guy died in chapter two. This shows that the author gets straight to the point and not make long paragraphs just to increase word count. As for the writing quality, I have noticed a few misspelled words. Probably proofreading would do the trick. Especially in chapter two. Anways, its not a big deal to me so yeah, five stars!!! Keep up the good work author!!!