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Review Detail of Eroos in Unsealing Emptiness

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Eroos
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I liked both the story and the mc since it gives it a different and interesting style, the only thing I could say that I don't like it is how the protagonist is so stoic even with his companions to the point of using them as experiments with the dragon nucleus, Also from the beginning you tried to give a relationship to Raven and Ozul but for some reason I realize that you regretted something that bothers to see how you try to distance the woman more and more, it would be good that with another part you would give more feelings to the protagonist like this justifies and leaves no gap, a romance would not disturb the story since it would be fun to see a stoic protagonist trying to carry out a romance without understanding what he feels

Unsealing Emptiness

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Nay don't worry. I am not distancing them, it's just that the story is at a point where I can't put those scenes. And no matter what others say, the emotional relations of Ozul are a big part of this story. I want this to go in a particular way that I can't explain, but I can only hope that I will be able to show it in the story when the time comes.