Review Detail of Vistarion in War Online
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It's ok, for naw its just a copy of all novels mmorpg -> going beck in time. For naw(40chp) its 100% plot armor. Mc cash -> his dad is reach. Mc power -> he knows future. Mc status-> he is given fame because he knows future and can gain first clears on achievements (fame converts to his status as a Viscount). Mc lv -> his men will lv him up, or the guards he hired thx to "viscount" status will. For naw there Is nothing that MC did that define him or his personality. There is a lot of status screens(lv, stats, skills) so if you buy a chapters there is a risk of buying a stats sheet. I don't think author should ask for $$$ before he even let us know MC. For naw(40chp) its just world building and its a copy of all other "mc goes beck and know it all". Im droping this nowel since im unwilling to spend $ without knowing what im paying for (1-40 is not worth $).
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I tried reading more, I did to 55 chapter. Its absolute trash. It's just sad MC builds corporation in game but author has 0 idea on the topic. So Author skips all business building and throws commends like "hire" "borrow 500k" "invest"to create illusion of smart mc but he never do it properly(author own IQ/knowledge is a problem). All author can do in this book is give MC op items, class, plot armor. But the problem is you can't create a good book without real content. So even if you write a lot of content on plot armor when it comes to real world building (business and real side characters) its just crumbling. There is no real characters other than MC. My advise for author is to focus on game elements stop trying to create content about business in game. After all you can't write about something you have 0 idea about. Try to focus on MC solo play you might be better at that.
This book is good and many things start to make sense if you get too chapter 120 + but sadly not a lot of people have the attention span, but the mc was never suppose to be smart as he skipped school, etc. so where did you get the idea he is trying to look smart when most people who read can tell his not smart, but i dont recomend this novel gor people who hate bad or average begining as this story gets better pass chapter 100 as most things start getting better described and authors quality gets better.
Also although he has power if you read till 100+ a lot of bad things happen which he struggles through spoiler: his father dies, mafia collapses. He also knows nothing about managing as he ran away from home in his previous life, also he doesn't know much about war online as he quited early on from being supressed, so he is weak willed, this changes as story progresses but its your decision if you want to read it I'm just recommending you read it to 150 if upu have the patience and see what you think.