Review Detail of Randomguy791 in War Online

writing quality - quite good for a novel on this site. stability of updates - very frequent story development - the only thing done is mostly grinding for the most part (read up to chapter 26). the level up frequency is so fast that barely anything is explored at all. it just ends up as a 1) go here, 2) kill mob , 3) level up. repeat. if i could give this section a 0 i would give it a zero. character design -up until chapter 26 character interactions are quite minimal and short given it has been mostly grinding or orders given, thus making every character seem 1 dimensional. 2 stars total. extra star for the mafia background which is different from what you normally see. world background - suffers from same reason as story development. nothing touched upon. all we know is that mc went here got legend class, went there and trained. went there to dungeon, go there to train. no point in remembering places since mc will just speed past it soon enough. its a story wiith a good premise but pacing is obviously an issue. level ups have gone by so fast that mc is past level 100 in 26 chapters and this spans only a few days since game release. perhaps it got better in the future, i wouldn't know because i am dropping this novel here. without story development or world background in terms of quests, the game is very flat and does not engage my imagination of different scenes. given that this game should span years, the fast paced leveling is broken and i dread what kind of levels will make sense years down the timeline. If you can stomache the issues or dont mind it, feel free to continue reading. i applaud you for i couldnt bear it.