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Kritiko
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šŸ§WARNING: This novel is not for people who loves a cold and brute mafia type mc. Our mc here is witty and cool. He can also be ruthless and calculative. šŸ”„ Author's writing quality is refreshing and easy to follow. No grammatical errors here and there. The only concern is the use of punctuations. šŸ”„Story development flowed nicely. So far, @ch.70, MC is still more focused on gaming. Personally, I would want to read more wherein the MC engages in mafia related stuffs in real life, we can understand that it's still too early for that and he needs to focus more on gaming to build up his foundation in game. šŸ”„Regarding character design, well, I really love the MC's personality especially when he does things logically. He's a great MC that thinks practically rather than complicating things.(no fillers so far) Side characters are also well written. They are not overly emphasized but still, one can feel their importance and relevance to the story. šŸ”„Updating stability? As long as the author does not drop this, I would rate it 5* because so far, I'm really enjoying the story. šŸ”„The world background is separated in two ways in general. The world background in-game so far is ever changing because our MC is trying to boost his character's level and status for him to implement his future plans. So far, it's what you would expect from a story with a game genre. On the other hand, his real life world background is what interests me the most. Though not a lot has been given as we are still in the beginning chapters, it's something that we readers should look out for. šŸ€PS: idk why this novel is not at the top 100 yet. even repetitive, unreasonable logic, and grammatically incoherent novels are in top? this novel just lacks exposure. it deserves more. I've been searching for gold and I found gold indeed. Dear Mr. Author, stay safe and healthy. Also, more chapters please? šŸ˜

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Kritiko
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After reading at 100+ chapters, I've become disappointed and gave this a low star vote. a fan and supporter of this book commented on my post about being too harsh and ruining the book's rating saying I should talk to the author as i was once a fan of this before. now I've just deleted my low star review on this book. I hope you guys are satisfied. well, that review was a bit harsh but was well thought. if people can't handle critics, how can one improve? lot's of novels here have 4.5 to 4.8 rating but are buried. if nothing will change, this book will be one of them. author, stop milking chapters and please stop the ridiculous stats. mc was supposed to be an average gamer that stopped playing after 3years not someone like the "no.1 player that reincarnated after being betrayed" like other novels. he was supposed to be a nobody/regular guy in-game.

Snowstar
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in my defense, the concept of millions/billions in stats was actually inspired from "Skyforge" game where it had even trillions in terms of HP... It's because I'm following a certain formula, they were ended up such way, not because of making up number on whim... The calculation part was mentioned in stat chapters... As for MC, I think he exactly behaves like an average player. If you read carefully, you can find, he rarely uses techniques to defeat his enemies. All of them are just being defeated because of large difference in damage. Can't say anymore as they would be spoilers... Lastly, for the stat chapters, I believe a warning was being mentioned in previous chapter as well as at the starting. Even if one doesn't see it, the chapter name itself is the warning... I hope I was able explain myself properly. If there are any other complaints, other than grammar, please do mention here or in author's review. I'll try answer them and resolve it...

Kritiko:After reading at 100+ chapters, I've become disappointed and gave this a low star vote. a fan and supporter of this book commented on my post about being too harsh and ruining the book's rating saying I should talk to the author as i was once a fan of this before. now I've just deleted my low star review on this book. I hope you guys are satisfied. well, that review was a bit harsh but was well thought. if people can't handle critics, how can one improve? lot's of novels here have 4.5 to 4.8 rating but are buried. if nothing will change, this book will be one of them. author, stop milking chapters and please stop the ridiculous stats. mc was supposed to be an average gamer that stopped playing after 3years not someone like the "no.1 player that reincarnated after being betrayed" like other novels. he was supposed to be a nobody/regular guy in-game.
Kritiko
KritikoLv10Kritiko

I haven't played skyforge so to ascertain your claim, I had my friend Google help me. and yes, some players got billions on stats but they are not your average player. they are those who spend lots of cash(whales), grind all day and mostly played 24/7 in game. is the MC doing that? nope. he's spending millions in game but for business purposes not for buying legendary equipments or rare infos. you can argue that it's because he knows a lot and is doing his best to maximize his gains through his information from the past. that could be a reason, but if that's the case then he's not your average gamer anymore. I would understand it if he was once a gamer geek before then or one of those in top 1000 of the game. and his business acuity is off the charts for someone who spent most of his life running from enemies after his father's death. regarding the stst chap, it was my mistake, I was just ranting. but, 1.who reads ever author's thoughts every end of the chapter anyway? mostly what's written in it is some clarifications on some ambiguous circumstances that happened in the chapter or just plain hyping for the next chap. 2. you say it says in the title, duh, it says "special chapter" it doesn't help at all. what kind of warning is that? if you put it like "Status update(can be skipped)" then you would not hear anything from me. grammatically your novel has no problems that's one of the reasons I've rated it high before. the only is that the MC has no struggles anymore. he's just basically mowing down his enemies with his ridiculous stats. your point of what an average player is in line with his skills set but I'm not talking about that. I was talking about him knowing all the goodies in the story and getting them all easily. as if he experienced them all already. not fun at all. at the end of the day, you can just ignore what I said, it won't matter as long as the rating of the novel is good. I was just being nitpicky. on the bright side, i already deleted my low star rating so there's no problem at all. good day.

Snowstar:in my defense, the concept of millions/billions in stats was actually inspired from "Skyforge" game where it had even trillions in terms of HP... It's because I'm following a certain formula, they were ended up such way, not because of making up number on whim... The calculation part was mentioned in stat chapters... As for MC, I think he exactly behaves like an average player. If you read carefully, you can find, he rarely uses techniques to defeat his enemies. All of them are just being defeated because of large difference in damage. Can't say anymore as they would be spoilers... Lastly, for the stat chapters, I believe a warning was being mentioned in previous chapter as well as at the starting. Even if one doesn't see it, the chapter name itself is the warning... I hope I was able explain myself properly. If there are any other complaints, other than grammar, please do mention here or in author's review. I'll try answer them and resolve it...
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InHisName
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You were entitled to your opinion - especially since it's constructive. I will be blunt with you, it's absolutely pathetic of you to compromise and delete your own review.

Kritiko:After reading at 100+ chapters, I've become disappointed and gave this a low star vote. a fan and supporter of this book commented on my post about being too harsh and ruining the book's rating saying I should talk to the author as i was once a fan of this before. now I've just deleted my low star review on this book. I hope you guys are satisfied. well, that review was a bit harsh but was well thought. if people can't handle critics, how can one improve? lot's of novels here have 4.5 to 4.8 rating but are buried. if nothing will change, this book will be one of them. author, stop milking chapters and please stop the ridiculous stats. mc was supposed to be an average gamer that stopped playing after 3years not someone like the "no.1 player that reincarnated after being betrayed" like other novels. he was supposed to be a nobody/regular guy in-game.
Kritiko
KritikoLv10Kritiko

most people would not appreciate a constructive criticism. I even met an author here that deleted my honest review and deleted the comments where I was asking about the loopholes in the story. he even boasted that his work was in top 200 and that his novel is on the trendy category and he does not care if I don't like his book saying he will automatically delete anything I say. so, what I did here is based on experience. everyone is entitled to his/her opinion. I get that. but calling me pathetic? were you too down in life that people would mostly call you that and in turn call random people by the same words the people around you use to call you on daily basis? don't do that bro. good day

InHisName:You were entitled to your opinion - especially since it's constructive. I will be blunt with you, it's absolutely pathetic of you to compromise and delete your own review.
Kritiko
KritikoLv10Kritiko

you know what's more pathetic? it's you making a big deal out of it. I don't even care about it anymore. and it does not affect my life at all. I like the novel on its first few chapters so I just let it be. if the author takes my advice then that's for the best. if he does not then it's all on him. stop being a Karen ok? Merry Christmas.

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